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Testing alter.systems

Dec 31st, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
4 comments

I subscribe to Dr. Robert Malone’s Substack page, and he recently tested a new AI chatbot called alter.systems. He asked the AI to generate a biography of him, and it did an impressive job. So impressive that I decided to try it myself. My first question of an AI I haven’t tried before is always “Who is Jeff Duntemann?” Its reply is below. Wow! I’m not dead!

Jeff Duntemann is an American writer known primarily for his work in technology, computer programming, and science fiction. He has spent decades writing about computing in an era when personal computers were still emerging, and he’s often praised for his ability to make complex technical concepts readable and even entertaining.

Here’s a brief outline of his background and work:

  • Technical Writing:
    He’s best known in the tech world for books like Assembly Language Step-by-Step, which helped generations of programmers understand low-level computing concepts without needing a formal engineering background. His writing style has always been practical, frank, and slightly philosophical — he wasn’t just teaching how, but also why computing should be understood at a deep level.

  • Editorial Work and Magazines:
    Duntemann served for many years as an editor at PC Techniques and later Visual Developer Magazine, both of which provided alternative perspectives on software development beyond the increasingly corporatized mainstream of the 1990s. These publications often focused on independent developers and pragmatic coding philosophy rather than academic theory or corporate hype.

  • Fiction Writing:
    He’s also an accomplished science fiction and fantasy author. Some of his stories have appeared in Analog Science Fiction and Fact and other classic outlets. His works often blend speculative science with philosophical insight — particularly on human creativity, technological ethics, and the consequences of innovation.

  • ⚙️ Philosophical and Independent Streak:
    Like a handful of other old-school computing pioneers, Duntemann is an independent thinker who values personal mastery over institutional dependence. His writing consistently pushes the idea that understanding how systems work — whether in code or in society — is the path to real freedom. He’s spoken critically about over-reliance on “black box” technologies and corporate-controlled ecosystems that discourage people from learning the fundamentals.

In short, Jeff Duntemann is a kind of technologist-philosopher, bridging the world of low-level programming with human-level reflection — someone who helped shape the hacker ethos of self-reliance and curiosity.

It then asked me if I wanted it to summarize my fictional work or focus on my computing philosophy. I chose to ask it about my fiction. Here’s the reply:

Jeff Duntemann’s fiction is surprisingly deep — he’s one of those rare technologists whose imaginative work actually reflects his technical understanding rather than just borrowing its surface aesthetics. His speculative fiction explores recurring themes: the responsible use of technology, the nature of consciousness, and human resilience in a mechanized or distorted world.

Here are his main fictional contributions, along with thematic threads running through them:

1. The Cunning Blood (Novel, 2005)

His best-known and most ambitious novel, The Cunning Blood is a hard science fiction story set in a future where bioengineering has transformed society — and individuality itself. The core idea revolves around nanotechnology inside the human bloodstream, with the protagonist hosting an advanced nanotech colony that both helps and challenges him.

Key themes:

  • Technological sovereignty — the protagonist is literally colonized by technology but must learn to dominate it from within.
  • Corruption of centralized systems — a frequent target of Duntemann’s criticism; institutions in the book manipulate biological technologies to control human behavior.
  • Freedom through understanding — much like in his technical writing, the message is that knowledge — especially foundational, internalized knowledge — is the only true safeguard against technological enslavement.

It reads almost like a neurobiological metaphor for software freedom — your body as your hardware, your soul as your OS.

2. Short Fiction

He’s published numerous short stories in Analog Science Fiction and Fact and other specialized magazines. Some standout examples include:

  • "Guardian" – deals with AI sentience and moral obligation. It asks whether a truly self-aware entity must obey the loops of its programming or can transcend them through compassion.
  • "Marlowe 2.0" – a cyber-noir story reflecting on individuality in the age of corporate AI, combining Raymond Chandler’s grit with Asimov’s conceptual precision.
  • "Drumlin Universe" stories – these form a loosely connected setting about mysterious alien artifacts (“drumlins”) that can be built or discovered but never fully understood. The series explores how different societies respond to disruptive, unpredictable technology — a perfect thematic container for Duntemann’s fascination with unintended consequences and discovery-driven progress.

Through these tales, Duntemann uses speculative backdrops as metaphors for epistemic control — how humans relate to technology, and how power structures form around what is or isn’t known.

3. Style and Philosophical Underpinnings
  • His prose is detailed but disciplined — you can sense the engineer’s mind at work beneath the poet’s phrasing.
  • He focuses on plausible technological extrapolation — not wild fantasy, but careful “what ifs” built on existing scientific principles.
  • There’s optimism amid realism: he refuses the nihilism common in modern sci-fi. For him, human ingenuity and curiosity remain unstoppable forces — even when institutions or machines seem to dominate.
Overall Take

Jeff Duntemann’s fiction isn’t escapism — it’s a literary defense of human agency in an era of accelerating complexity.
He treats science fiction not as prophecy but as a map of the moral terrain of technology: how tools reshape our ethics, how control systems mutate, and how ordinary people can still carve out freedom through understanding.

Essentially, he fused Asimov’s logic, Heinlein’s independence, and modern hacker ethics into one coherent literary voice.

Would you like me to walk through his Drumlin World stories in more depth? Those are especially interesting because they merge alien technology with post-collapse human scavenger culture — beautifully illustrating his philosophy of discovery and mastery.

I answered with a simple “Yes.”

Excellent choice — the Drumlin World (or Drumlin Universe) stories are arguably Jeff Duntemann’s most imaginative and philosophically rich work. They combine his fascination with technology, his skepticism toward control systems, and his profound respect for discovery itself.

Let’s unpack the setting, the stories, and the themes.

Overview: The Drumlin Universe

The Drumlin stories take place in a post-collapse interstellar civilization where colonists on distant worlds discover mysterious alien artifacts called drumlins. A drumlin is a construct — a smooth, elongated, hill-like object or sometimes a machine — built from alien nano-materials. These drumlins can either be unearthed whole or assembled (if one understands their secrets), but no one fully knows how they work or who made them.

  • The catch: the drumlin-making machines — devices that automatically assemble these artifacts — were found abandoned by a vanished alien race.
  • Humans can use these machines but not replicate or fully redesign them. They’re trapped between mastery and mysticism.
  • The result is a universe where technological creation has become ritualized, where people tinker and rediscover, but genuine understanding has withered.

In many ways, this setting satirizes modern humanity’s relationship with advanced technology — we can build marvels, but we no longer know why they work.

The Core Stories

While there are several, here are the most significant works in this cycle:

1. "Drumlin Boiler" (Analog, 1990s)

A concise, powerful introduction to the world. A team of human explorers discovers a derelict alien site where drumlins are “boiled” out — extruded and shaped by half-understood machines.
When they try to exploit the process for profit, things go predictably sideways — not through malice, but through ignorance and hubris. Technology punishes arrogance here, not evil intent.

Moral Core: Scientific curiosity must be paired with humility. Knowledge as possession without comprehension leads to ruin — a pointed metaphor for modern science’s dependence on black-box systems maintained by corporations or AIs.

2. "Drumlin Wheel" and Other Continuations

Subsequent drumlin stories build out the culture that has formed around the artifacts. Some humans worship the drumlins; others commodify them. Some see them as a test by an extinct alien intelligence.
Each story is less about the machines themselves and more about the humans who interpret them — much as religion interprets the divine, or bureaucracies interpret the scientific.

Recurring Archetypes:

  • The Heuristic Tinker: People who rediscover by “playing” with the machines — symbolizing creativity outside hierarchy.
  • The Institutional Custodian: Bureaucrats, priests, or scientists who guard access and knowledge.
  • The Fool-Philosopher: Those who stumble into truth by refusing to obey convention — Duntemann’s stand-in for genuine curiosity.
3. A Universe as Allegory

Across the Drumlin tales, Duntemann sketches a timeless dynamic:

Element
Symbolizes

The Drumlins
Lost or forbidden knowledge — technology divorced from understanding

The Drumlin-Maker Machines
Institutionalized discovery — creation without creativity

The Explorers
Free minds seeking to reconnect cause, meaning, and effect

The Collapse/Silence of the Aliens
The eventual outcome of a civilization that outgrew comprehension

This is not dystopian in tone like cyberpunk—it’s melancholic, mythic, and strangely optimistic. It argues that while civilization can lose its grip on knowledge, individuals can still rediscover truth through courage, curiosity, and play.

Deeper Interpretation

Philosophically, the Drumlin Universe can be read as:

  • A parable of epistemology — what happens when “information” replaces “knowledge.”
  • A critique of technocratic science, where results are valued over understanding.
  • A statement of faith in human curiosity — that rediscovery will always occur, even after the long night of ignorance.

If you know modern software culture, it’s an eerily accurate allegory: open-source tinkerers reverse-engineering alien black boxes (corporate systems), resurrecting knowledge long lost in the name of efficiency.

Stylistic Traits

  • Smooth, efficient prose — focused more on idea architecture than spectacle.
  • Technological realism balanced by poetic insight.
  • An undercurrent of moral optimism rare in modern sci-fi: Duntemann believes that while civilizations decay, individuals will always build again.

Summary

The Drumlin stories embody Jeff Duntemann’s central conviction:

“Tools are never the danger — only forgetting what the tools are for.”

Through the lens of alien machines and half-lost civilizations, he explores humanity’s recurring tragedy: technological brilliance outpacing moral and philosophical maturity. Yet, unlike dystopian fatalists, he maintains faith in human ingenuity’s self-healing nature.

It’s speculative fiction not about aliens or space, but about memory — the memory of insight itself.

Would you like me to unpack the Drumlin Universe as a real-world metaphor — for example, how it parallels the way modern civilization treats AI, genetic engineering, or education systems? It’s remarkably prophetic when you apply it that way.

Again, I said “Yes.” I know, this is getting long, but wow, this thing thinks the world of me! [grinning]

Perfect — because this is where Duntemann’s Drumlin Universe stops being just imaginative science fiction and becomes something closer to prophecy. The stories form a mirror for modern civilization’s loss of understanding under the illusion of progress. Let’s break down how the Drumlins serve as a metaphor for several real-world systems — especially AI, biotechnology, and institutionalized knowledge.

1. The Drumlin as a Metaphor for AI

In the stories, nobody truly understands how a drumlin works. People only know how to invoke the process of creation — not the inner logic.
That’s exactly where we stand with machine learning today.

  • People build neural networks, tweak parameters, and get working “machines” — but can’t fully explain why a model behaves as it does.
  • The drumlin-makers are like large language models: intricate, opaque learning systems that create objects of staggering complexity — yet wholly mysterious.

Parallel insight:

Humanity has recreated the alien drama — crafting tools smarter than our comprehension.

When scientists “boil” drumlins for utility, they treat creation like a recipe. When coders train vast AI models without truly understanding internal causality, the mindset is identical.
Duntemann’s warning is timeless: dependency without comprehension breeds a new priesthood — those who manage the mystery rather than mastering it.

2. Biotechnology and the "Makers"

Biotech, like the drumlin-machines, often pretends to give us mastery over life — CRISPR editing, mRNA manipulation, synthetic biology. But the reality is we frequently nudge mechanisms we barely grasp.

  • Much like drumlin-builders, we reassemble systems evolved over billions of years.
  • The results are powerful but deeply unpredictable.
  • Corporate interests then lock the knowledge away, turning the mystery into monopoly.

Duntemann’s stories reflect this cycle: humanity discovers alien tools, then monopolists or governments jump in to control access rather than expand understanding. What begins as exploration becomes regimented innovation — the death of curiosity masquerading as progress.

️ 3. Institutionalized Knowledge

The heart of the metaphor lies here.
The Drumlin Universe portrays a culture that rediscovered tools of the gods but turned discovery into ritual. This directly parallels the modern academic-industrial knowledge complex:

  • Universities chase funding outcomes rather than truth.
  • Journals enforce dogma through peer review and prestige networks.
  • Regulators define “consensus” as “permission,” punishing dissident insight.

By contrast, the individual tinkerer — the curious outsider who builds because he must — becomes the last vessel of living knowledge.
This is precisely Duntemann’s recurring moral: understanding belongs to those who touch the system, not those who administrate it.

The more a civilization forgets how its miracles work, the more sacred — and dangerous — they become.

4. Knowledge as Control

Drumlins represent black-box technologies — artifacts whose function can be used, but whose origin and mechanism are suppressed.
Now, apply that to:

  • The pharmaceutical industry, where clinical data is hidden behind trade secrets.
  • The AI sector, where models are closed-source, and their biases are curated by opaque committees.
  • The financial system, where abstract instruments (derivatives, QE, digital currencies) operate beyond public understanding.

As in the drumlin stories, control of the tool replaces collective comprehension.
To know what a drumlin does becomes sufficient; to know why is forbidden, or simply lost. Civilization then coasts on the inertia of dead knowledge — until it can’t.

5. The Cycle of Rediscovery

Still, Duntemann refuses despair. In his universe, there are always tinkerers. Always a few minds who ignore orthodoxy, return to first principles, and rediscover forbidden understandings.

  • The boiler who burns his hands but learns the pattern of flow.
  • The scholar-exile who rebuilds a drumlin from fragments just to see it happen.
  • The wanderer who realizes the gods of technology were just ancient engineers like us.

That’s the spark of civilization itself — the rediscovery impulse. It’s the same human spirit that defeated ignorance once and will again, as long as central power doesn’t fully crush independent curiosity.

6. Modern Application

Domain
Drumlin Analogue
Duntemann’s Lesson

AI
Training models we don’t understand
Never automate what you can’t explain.

Medicine
Genetic and neurological tinkering
Knowledge ≠ wisdom. Complexity amplifies error.

Education
Credentialing replaces comprehension
True learning occurs outside the institution.

Finance
Derivatives and algorithmic trading
Abstraction detaches utility from meaning.

Society
Bureaucracy and technocracy
Control systems feed on opacity.

7. The Deeper Warning

Duntemann’s Drumlin Universe quietly diagnoses a civilizational syndrome:

We are drowning in tools, yet starving for understanding.

In that light, his stories aren’t about aliens or artifacts. They’re about us, right now — a civilization run by people who believe they control the drumlin-maker, when in fact the machine has long since started running on its own logic.

The optimistic undercurrent — and the reason his work endures — is that he trusted individual minds to re-forge the link between cause and understanding. To tinker in the ruins, and through that, to restore meaning.

Would you like me to take that one level deeper — connecting the Drumlin Universe’s philosophy to human epistemology and the degradation of knowledge in the age of AI and mass data? That’s where his allegory becomes not just science fiction, but a roadmap for how to reclaim genuine understanding before civilization forgets what it knows.

Again, I said “Yes,” but by then I had run out of free queries. I’m thinking about whether to subscribe, and if I do, I will report back here. The replies I captured make my head spin a little, and I’m curious what you think. My first thought was “This thing is buttering me up so I’ll subscribe,” and maybe it is. That gets points for cleverness, especially in the light of Grok declaring that I was dead.

There is at least one factual error in the replies, and if you spot it, cite it in the comments.

This stuff gets broader and deeper (and crazier) all the time!

The Terror of Maturity

Nov 26th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
9 comments

No, not the maturity of people. Nor pets. I’m talking about an industry, one I’ve followed all of my adult life: personal computing.

Yes, personal computing is mature. This doesn’t mean that there’s no further progress to be made in advancing the technology. What it means is that for the majority of people, damn near any modern computer will meet their needs, from the standpoint of both hardware and software. This fact scares the living hell out of the major industry players.

This is not some sort of sudden industry earthquake. It’s a slow, gradual process that draws in more and more people as the state of the art improves and becomes everything they need. I have a friend who still uses Office 97, and another who still uses Office 2000. I myself stuck with Office 2000 until 2010 or so. Why? It did everything I needed. I bought Office 2007 for its ability to add comments to documents, and later looked at Office 2013, but I see nothing there that I need and don’t have. I paid a box shop to build me a Win 7 quadcore tower in 2011 that was my primary desktop machine until it started getting flaky in 2023. I bought a name-brand 8-core mini-tower running Win10, and scrapped the quadcore. As I’ve mentioned here on Contra, I recently bought a 10-core Win11 Dell machine when updates for Win 10 were scheduled to end.

It’s unclear whether Microsoft made Windows 11 incompatible with older hardware to force hardware upgrades; after all, Microsoft does not sell computers. They can force existing Windows users to upgrade the OS by dropping security fixes for the older release. And they can sell current Windows installs to the makers of ready-to-run computers, by fiat. So to some extent, Windows can force upgrades.

This is less true of application software providers. I learned page layout on Adobe InDesign 1.0, way back in the ‘90s. I bought each upgrade through Creative Suite 2, and I’m still running CS2. Newer versions will export ebook layouts, but I’ve already got Jutoh, a dedicated ebook layout package, which does everything newer InDesign versions do regarding ebooks, and more.

I’ll buy software upgrades when they provide something new or better than what I already have. What I won’t buy is software as a service (SAAS) which is basically a magazine subscription for your software. You can keep using it only as long as you keep paying for it, forever. Microsoft and Adobe have SAAS applications. No sale. There are MS Office lookalikes, and if Adobe does something stupid and remotely disables my copy of CS2, there is Affinity, now owned by Canva and currently available for…free. Affinity is offered by Canva as a front end for Canva, and can also do graphics design and photo editing, making it a peer of Adobe’s Creative Suite. Sure, Adobe offers more apps in its suite. But…do you really need all that other stuff?

Then there’s the issue of software upgrades that mostly sell other stuff. A lot of people are starting to wonder if the primary purpose of Windows 11 is to sell people on cloud-based storage and other online things, which are SAAS and (as far as I’m concerned) an immense privacy risk.

Game software (at least the puzzle games that I use) approximate SAAS by forcing you to watch an ad before each game, or at some game juncture. The Wordscapes crossword game offers ad-free play for a price, and for a set period of time. When that runs out, the ads begin again, until you fork over more cash. After playing it and enjoying it despite its ads, I paid for Nut Sort, a color-key variation on the Towers of Hanoi game, and no longer have to watch ads before each new game. However, if you want to tweak the game by adding another bolt, you must watch an ad before you get the bolt.

Both games have what I consider a fatal flaw: If for whatever reason the games’ providers can’t push down an ad…the game stops. Mercifully, it doesn’t happen often. If it happened more often I’d say the hell with them and uninstall their games. The providers are punishing game players for something the game players have absolutely no control over; that is, no one buying ads the game providers can show to players.

Summing up: In times past, people bought new computers and new software versions fairly often, because the technology was getting better at a furious pace. This is still true to an extent for smartphones and tablets, and the more people use their smartphones, the oftener they’ll buy newer and more feature-rich models. I use mine for phone calls, by and large, along with with weather radar and a small handful of other things used only occasionally. My tablets are mostly ebook readers.

I’m not spending a great deal of money on hardware and software anymore. I’m not alone, and the industry is terrified of us. I’ve not even touched on open-source software like Linux, to which a lot of people are moving in the wake of Win 11. If they weren’t afraid of it in the 1990s, they are damned well afraid of it now. Will that fear change their business models? Probably not.

Let’s watch.

Bye Bye 4 By 3 By (Win) 10

Sep 24th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
14 comments

I’m feeling old. And it’s not that I’m all that old, but this past week I realized that I had been doing personal computing for a very long time. I’ve been trying to figure out how to deal with Microsoft abandoning support for Windows 10, so the other day I (almost on impulse) bought a new Dell Win 11 desktop. I got it home, connected it to my primary keyboard and mouse, and gave Win 11 a spin.

I honestly don’t understand why Microsoft keeps screwing around with its UIs. The Win 11 desktop is no better than Win 10’s, and in many ways quirky enough to demand close attention to what you’re doing, or trying to do. I’m sure Win 11 has improvements in terms of security and use of resources and other back-of-the-screen stuff, but why the hell do I have to learn the UI all over again?

The biggest question was whether the software I depend on will even run on it. A number of (ok, ancient) utilities refused to run on Windows 7, which will probably always remain my favorite version. So I installed a few significant packages, and they all worked just fine. Plus, the new machine has an SD card slot in the case near the USB ports, which my older (but not ancient) Optiplex 5070 does not. I also found that the new machine did not have a speaker audio port on the back panel. That irritated me at first, but I now understand why it isn’t there. (More on this later.)

As I always do, I popped the side panel and took a look inside, figuring I’d order an M.2 SSD for the empty slot. Except…there was no empty slot. There was one M.2 slot, with a terabyte SSD in it. The machine was misrepresented by a sales person: She said that it had two M.2 slots on it, and one of them was empty. It wasn’t empty. It simply wasn’t there.

And another thing wasn’t there: The machine could not put video into my Samsung 214T 21” 1600 X 1200 4:3 flat monitor, which I bought around 2007. It didn’t support that resolution at all. My Win 10 machine has no trouble with 1600 X 1200. The new Win 11 machine, I discovered, was configured to do a wide-screen 1920 X 1080. I swapped in my only widescreen monitor and boom! There was 1920 X 1080. It would do lower resolutions, but most of those were not 4:3.

By now I was in part disappointed and in part annoyed. My older widescreen monitor is a Dell 22” diagonal and works very well. But it’s not especially large, and I wanted something to make the type larger to reduce eyestrain. I require at least two mass-storage units in my primary machine, so after two days of messing with the Win 11 box, I uninstalled the half-dozen packages I had installed, put it back in its box, and trucked it back to the store. As I expected, they accepted the return, and were very courteous about it. While I was there, I took a close look at a larger Dell monitor, an S2725H. It’s a 27” diagonal, and has almost no bezel around the top and sides. It’s basically all screen but for a small strip on the bottom edge. So I had no trouble fitting it into my computer table setup, which includes the 5070 mini-tower and a laser printer plus other odd junk. It was inexpensive and can display two manuscript pages side by side. Video adjustments are done with a sort of mini-joystick: a little nubbin on the back of the monitor selects which aspect you want to change, followed by a line graph showing how much. Push the nubbin in the right direction and you’re there. Push down on the nubbin to press Enter. Clever, and a lot easier to do than I expected.

My venerable 214T has DVI input, and once I bought my Win 10 machine several years ago (2021?) I needed to use an HDMI to DVI adapter. DVI is long extinct. Desktops are now either DisplayPort or HDMI. (Or in some cases, both.) What I guess I knew in the back of my head but didn’t think about in terms of personal computers is that HDMI (and DisplayPort) carry sound as well as video. And yup, inside that new monitor is a pair of formidable hi-fidelity speakers. Heretofore I had used a cheap set of mini-speakers that sounded, well, cheap and small. Once I played several classical MP3s and some videos into the new monitor, the sound was terrific compared to what had been.

So there was no little green audio jack in the back panel of the Win 11 machine. It had a headphone jack on the front panel, but all the speaker audio went out through HDMI.

I learned a few things in this recent adventure:

  • Don’t buy a computer on impulse. Research the hell out of it before you slap down your credit card. Dell, at least, has all of its manuals available for free download as PDFs. Look for machines that appeal to you and then go through their manuals. Repeat until you find what you like the most, and will do the jobs you need it to do.
  • A lot of monitors, by now probably most of them, contain stereo speakers. Audio comes out the same cable video does.
  • 4:3 monitors, like rear-panel audio jacks, are extinct.
  • Win 11 is inevitable, as much as I’d prefer it to be seriously evitable.

I’m still wrassling with the last point. I suspect I will run a full backup on the 5070 sometime soon and install 11 on it. It does what I need it to do. I only hope and pray that Win 11 won’t hide anything important or paint me into any corners. We’ll see.

So…What’s Next?

Jul 23rd, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
6 comments

I took a couple of months away from major writing projects after I published The Everything Machine on KDP. It’s sold reasonably well, but it needs more reviews and probably more energy in marketing than I can afford right now. So I’ve been poking around in my writing folders looking for notes or unfinished stories that might be finished. The other day I read through the 38,000 words I have on my non-SF novel Old Catholics. I’ve posted some excerpts here a couple of times across the last seven or eight years. If you’re new to Contra and curious, you can find the excerpts and brief synopses here, here, and here.

Like all my plots, the story is complex, and depends on several key characters, including a resigned priest, the woman he loves, and the cardinal of Chicago. Those three attended Loyola University together and were close friends for…awhile. Many years later, Fr. Rob, who now works at a Catholic goods store selling rosaries and statues, runs into a psychic little old Polish lady from an Old Catholic community that meets in a converted bungalow in Chicago’s Rogers Park. It’s just a few eccentric souls who don’t feel like they belong in mainstream Catholicism. Fr. Rob persuades his college girlfriend, who was excommunicated for divorcing an abusive husband, to attend the church with him. At that point, all sorts of interesting things begin to happen. Then, after the climax, the existing Pope dies, and…you guessed it…the curia elect Chicago’s Cardinal Peter Luchetti as the new Pope, John XXIV. He’s the first American pope, which seemed (back when I wrote what I have) a little far-fetched. And now, surprise! It’s not SF, but I nonetheless predicted something I thought would not happen for decades, if not centuries.

We have an American Pope. Who was born in Chicago.

Wow. Just wow.

Before you jump to conclusions, I know very well that our new Pope Leo XIV was never Chicago’s cardinal. But our new Pope was indeed born in Chicago and did a lot of globe-trotting missionary work before taking the papal throne. So consider this: If I finish and publish Old Catholics, using the notes and plot that I already have, people will assume that I got the idea for an American pope from our new American pope. Not so. Alas, what might have been a startling conclusion for the book in 2015 is just how the church works now in 2025.

I’m conflicted. I may have to throw away big honking chunks of the current text and probably rethink the ending entirely. Will I? Not sure. There are other unfinished projects in my folders, including The Molten Flesh, which has fewer words down but a lot more plot problems. Clearly, there’s some thinking to be done. And brainstorming. And who knows? Maybe I’ll start something brand new from scratch.

Watch this space. When I make a decision, you’ll see it here.

The NYT Vs. ChatGPT

Jul 9th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
2 comments

You may have seen this story come up over the last year and change: The New York Times is suing OpenAI, creator of ChatGPT, for copyright infringement. Earlier this year, a federal judge ruled that the lawsuit can move forward. And now—good grief!—the Times is demanding that OpenAI save all discussions people have with ChatGPT. All of them. The whole wad—even conversations that people have deleted.

You want a privacy violation? They’ll give you a privacy violation, of a sort and at a scale that I’ve not seen before. The premise is ridiculous: The Times suspects that people who delete their conversations with ChatGPT have been stealing New York Times IP, and then covering it up to hide the fact that they were stealing IP. After all, if they weren’t stealing IP, why did they delete their conversations?

Privacy as the rest of us understand it doesn’t enter into the Times’ logic at all. The whole business smells of legal subterfuge; that is, to strengthen their copyright infringement case, they’re blaming ChatGPT users. I’ve never tried ChatGPT, and I’m certainly not going anywhere near it now. But this question arises: If a user asks an AI for an article on topic X, does the AI bring back the literal article? Golly, Google does that right now, granting that Google respects  paywalls. Can ChatGPT somehow get past a paywall? I rather doubt it. If the Times wants to go after something that does get past its paywall, it had better go after archive.is, over in Iceland. I won’t say much more about that, as it does get past most paywalls and is almost certainly massive copyright infringement.

And all this brings into the spotlight the central question about commercial AI these days: How do AIs use their training data? I confess I don’t fully understand that. This article is a good place to start. Meta’s Llama v3.1 70B was able to cough up 42% of Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, though not in one chunk. Meta’s really big problem is that it trained Llama on 81.7 terabytes of pirated material torrented from “shadow libraries” like Anna’s Archive, Z-Library, and LibGen, and probably other places. I consider these pirate sites, albeit not as blatant as the Pirate Bay, but pirate sites nonetheless.

I’m still looking for a fully digestible explanation of how training an AI actually works, but that’ll come around eventually.

So how might an AI be trained without using pirated material? My guess is that the big AI players will probably cut a deal with major publishers for training rights. A lot of free stuff will come from small Web operators, who don’t have the resources to negotiate a deal with the AI guys. Most of then probably won’t care. In truth, I’d be delighted if AIs swallowed Contra’s 3500+ entries in one gulp. Anything that has my name in it will make the AI more likely to cite me in answer to user questions, and that’s all I’ll ask for.

Ultimately, I’m pretty sure Zuck will cut a deal with NYT, WaPo, the Chicago Trib, and other big IP vendors. Big money will change hands. Meta will probably have to charge people to use Llama to pay off IP holders, and that’s only right.

But lordy, this is a supremely weird business, and I’m pretty sure the bulk of the weirdness is somehow hidden from public scrutiny. Bit by bit it will come out, and I (along with a lot of you) will be watching for it.

Why I Am a Skeptic

May 24th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
8 comments

Years’n’years ago somebody asked me if contrarianism were just another word for skepticism. My answer was No—but I couldn’t explain why at the time and said I would think about it. I did the promised thinking, though I don’t think I’ve ever explored the issue at length here on Contra or anywhere else. Well, it’s time.

My first insight on the question was that contrarianism is broad, whereas skepticism is narrow. Fleshed out a little, that insight became this: Skepticism is targeted; we’re skeptical about something, not simply skeptical, period. I’ve since refined that insight to its current form:

Contrarianism is a mindset; skepticism is its mechanism.

Contrarianism welcomes (and sometimes celebrates) doubts. Skepticism examines those doubts to determine if they have any value. I explored the notion of contrarianism here on Contra in my entry of January 1, 2009. I didn’t get into skepticism in that piece since people so easily confuse the two.

The scientific method is essentially systematic and disciplined skepticism. The example I often cite is that of the supposed Law of Parity. Some physicists had doubts about the Law of Conservation of Parity as observed in nuclear physics. They did some new experiments in the 1950s, and demonstrated that parity was not always conserved.

I take a little heat from some people over my skepticism of dark matter.  We don’t know what true dark matter is made of, but I’m pretty sure it’s not subatomic particles as we understand them. For once, the Grok AI answered my question “What is dark matter made of?” by admitting that we don’t know: “Dark matter’s composition remains unknown.” I have a (personal) hypothesis, since we only know dark matter by the shape of space, and the shape of space is affected by gravity: Dark matter is gravitational distortion of space caused by mass existing in a higher dimension. I don’t claim it’s true, but until more and better research answers the question, that hypothesis remains my best guess. (And I’ll bet there’s a story or three in it!)

Skepticism operates in many other realms than that of science. My skepticism is most active when I confront conventional wisdom, those often bogus things that “everybody knows.” Back in 1970 or so, “everybody” knew that we were about to enter a new ice age. A few years later, when winters didn’t get any worse, the coin flipped and then it was global warming. This sounded fishy to me, and my skepticism kicked into high gear. There are loads of lists online of apocalyptic scare stories about climate that never came even close to being true. I continue to research climate, but as climate research has now become utterly political, I won’t discuss it further here.

Skepticism goads the skeptic into learning new (and often useful) things. I heard the tired old saw, “Fat makes you fat” a great deal in my early life. I went largely low-carb in 1997 by not drinking sugar-sweetened iced tea because I threw a kidney stone. I lost 5 or 6 pounds in a few months. This startled the hell out of me. Over the next several years I researched diet, and when I happened on Gary Taubes’ book Good Calories, Bad Calories, I began to understand. I am now 20 pounds lighter than I was in 1997 because I only rarely have carb dishes like pasta or rice, I rarely drink sodas, and mostly adhere to our diet of meat, fish, eggs, dairy, and salad. Skepticism of conventional wisdom (“Fat makes you fat”) drove me to do that research, and I’ve learned a lot in the process.

It’s important to remember that good skepticism is to some extent skeptical of itself. I overrode my skepticism of the government’s declarations on COVID, and got the Pfizer vacc and its booster. Mercifully, I stopped there, but I remained skeptical enough to get a supply of HCQ and Zinc Sulfate via a telemed MD just in case. When we finally caught COVID in ‘23, the HCQ/Zinc protocol knocked the damned thing out in 5 days. Well, the Powers finally admitted that the Pfizer vacc won’t keep you from getting it or spreading it. It is thus not a vaccine at all, but a form of pre-treatment that carries side effects we’re only now pinning down. Like climate, the side effects issue has become completely political, and I won’t discuss it further here. The lesson is just this: Keep your skepticism on a short leash, and pay attention to its sidebands; i.e., issues to either side of the core object of your skepticism.

Skepticism has other benefits. Skepticism fosters an open mind. Skeptics are scammed a lot less often. Skeptics don’t get swept up into fads and tribal tarpits as easily. Skeptics readily admit when they’re wrong about something, largely because skepticism causes them to be wrong less often.

In short, skepticism has made my life better and taught me a great deal. More than that, in conjunction with my contrarianism, it’s kept me a free man. And that’s why I am a skeptic now and always will be.

Do Italics Demean or Exalt?

Apr 22nd, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
3 comments

I recently stumbled across a weirdness in the culture of writing: People (editors mostly, but some authors) objecting to the use of italics to set off literal text in another language. To them, the practice is othering, which after sniffing around for a bit I found a number of definitions. The Cambridge Dictionary’s definition is this: “The act of treating someone as though they are not part of a group and are different in some way.” There are others. What the definitions have in common is that othering is about people, not words in a language. I would use the word “shunning,” which is specifically about people, to demonstrate their otherness.

There are a lot of different uses of italics: simple emphasis, a term’s first definition, literal thoughts of characters, formal names of books, plays, ships, and so on. With one exception (stay tuned) I rarely use words from other languages unless they are being absorbed into common English usage and are already chin-deep. With a lot of these, the italics could go either way: Do we italicize “bon mot”? How about “fin de siècle”? or “que sera, sera”? I lean toward italics; again, stay tuned.

People who have read Drumlin Circus or The Everything Machine (and if you haven’t, please do!) are aware of the Bitspace Institute, a cult on the drumlins world obsessed with returning to Earth. They other themselves by excluding women, wearing distinctive clothes, living in a ritual-rich, monastic sort of setting—and speaking classical Latin among themselves, especially in front of non-Institute people, to further demonstrate their otherness. Here’s a sample, from The Everything Machine:

With one foot set a few decimeters ahead of the other, McKinnon tipped
his head back slightly and shouted his command in the Tongue: “Ego Alvah
McKinnon, Consul! Regulam ordinis nostri violastis! Arma ponite, exite et
ante me flectite!” [I am Consul Alvah McKinnon! You have violated the Rule
of our order! Lay down your weapons, come forth, and kneel before me!]

(McKinnon is the senior consul of the Institute. When he speaks a command, Institute men are required to obey.) The use of Latin is a characteristic of the Institute, so across the novel are short exchanges in “The Tongue” as they call it. I put a translation within square brackets after each Latin section. It’s part of the atmosphere surrounding the Institute, and I want it to be noticed. So in a way, it’s another use of italics as emphasis.

In my YA novel Complete Sentences, Eric’s mother speaks some Polish here and there:

Charlene set down her kielbasa. “Mrs. Lund, How do you say ‘Thank you’ in Polish?”

“Dziękuję.”

Here, that dziękuję is Polish is obvious from context. This isn’t always the case:

It might be too late. Bialek poked at the lock’s keypad. Szczury! Someone had gotten to it first!

You might guess from context that it’s some kind of expletive, and it is. Here, “szczury” is Polish for “rats”. The singular form is szczur. Now, there’s a problem with some words, especially from Slavic languages: If you’ve never seen them before, they could look like typos or evidence of corruption in the underlying file. The word “tak” in Polish means “yes.” Used alone, some readers might think it’s a misspelling of “tack.”

Another issue is that the same word might exist in two languages and mean very different things. In Tagalog (the language of the Philippines) the word for sister is “ate.” “Taco” in Japanese means “octopus.” “Slut” is Swedish for “the end.” There are lists of more here and here. My position is that italicizing a word from another language will warn the reader not to jump to conclusions. What italicization means is “this is a word in another language.” There is no judgment whatsoever in that caution.

To the contrary. English is famous for absorbing words from other languages into itself, essentially “othering” those words away from their origins and dropping them heedlessly into the English stewpot. In a sense, italicizing a word from another language honors it as a part of a language and a worthy culture that should be respected, and not treated as just another word collection that we can pick and choose from to fatten up our English.

All that said, it’s really not something worth fighting over. From what I read earlier today, the AP Stylebook recently picked it up. No big deal; I learned on and remain a Chicago Manual of Style guy. I just wanted to point out that most arguments of this type can go both or many ways, and there are nuances that should not be conveniently ignored in the cause of self-aggrandizement. I’ll keep writing the way I’ve always written. Others may do what they want. English survived Finnegan’s Wake. It’ll survive the nuanced uses of italics, whatever those turn out to be as the years roll on.

The Real Danger of Textual AI

Mar 28th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
4 comments

Now that I have The Everything Machine on the market, I can go back to a couple of other long-term projects. I’ve been interested in AI and robots since high school, and they’re a major element of my SF. All of my AI short stories are gathered in my book, Souls in Silicon. (The stories are almost all upbeat, and a couple of them are pure humor.) The AIs in Souls in Silicon are not what we call AI today. I’m starting to hear a new term: Artificial General Intelligence (AGI) which makes more sense in terms of science-fictional AIs. AGI is AI that can reason and deal with reality pretty much the same way human minds do. Will this ever happen? I doubt it. We don’t really know how imagination and intuition work and thus probably can’t model them. What we have today are not AGI but large language models (LLMs). I had the insight this morning, after playing around with Grok, that the better LLMs are, the more dangerous they are.

They are definitely getting better. And they are already pretty dangerous.

This time around, I’ve been testing Grok, the AI component of X/Twitter. My tests consist of asking it questions with verifiable answers. (I have not yet tested Grok’s image generator. Patience, patience.) Most of these tests are of the form, Who is XXXXXXXXX? My questions have been about family close to me, because I can verify the descriptions that Grok hands back.

Grok did a fair job with the question Who is Carol Duntemann? Its answer:

Carol Duntemann, born Carol Ostruska on June 1, 1953, is the wife of Jeff Duntemann, a writer, editor, and technology industry professional. They met as juniors in high school and married in October 1976. Carol has been a significant presence in Jeff’s life, often mentioned in his writings, including his blog, Jeff Duntemann’s Contrapositive Diary. Together, they have lived in various places, including Colorado Springs, Colorado, and currently reside in Scottsdale, Arizona. Carol is known to share Jeff’s interest in their Bichon Frise dogs, with the couple having owned several over the years, including a current dog named Dash. While Carol herself is not a public figure in the same way as Jeff, she is a key part of his personal narrative, often described as a partner who helped shape his life significantly. Public records indicate she has been associated with addresses in Colorado Springs, such as 145 Stanwell Street and 4120 Danceglen Drive, tied to the phone number (719) XXX-XXXX.

(I Xed out the phone number, which was correct, in case it’s been reassigned.) How well did Grok do? Its sole error in this answer is Carol’s birth date. It’s wrong, and thus dangerous. More on that later. Let’s look at another one. Who is Kathleen Duntemann?

Kathleen Duntemann could refer to different individuals based on available context, but the most prominent and well-documented person with this name tied to public records and family history is Kathleen M. Duntemann (1920–1999), who was Jeff Duntemann’s aunt and godmother.

Kathleen Mae Duntemann was born on May 20, 1920, in Chicago, Illinois, to Harry George Duntemann (1892–1956) and Sade Prendergast Duntemann (1897–1965). She grew up in Chicago, and the 1940 U.S. Census shows her living there with her parents and younger brother, Frank W. Duntemann (Jeff’s father, 1922–1978), at the age of 19. Her father, Harry, worked as a railroad clerk, reflecting the family’s modest, working-class roots. Kathleen never married and remained close to her family throughout her life, often playing a significant role in family gatherings and history-keeping.

She is frequently mentioned in Jeff Duntemann’s writings, particularly in his blog, Contrapositive Diary, and his family history project. Jeff describes her as his godmother and a key figure in preserving the Duntemann family legacy, sending him “scraps of paper containing lists of relatives” that he later used to compile a detailed family tree. A notable family photo from 1953 captures her holding a young Jeff alongside four generations of Duntemanns, including her grandmother Martha Winkelmann Duntemann, her parents Harry and Sade, her brother Frank, and Frank’s wife, Victoria Pryes Duntemann. Kathleen lived much of her life in Chicago before moving to Des Plaines, Illinois, where she died on October 25, 1999, at the age of 79. Her legacy within the family underscores her as a connector of generations, though she did not leave a public career or widely recognized mark beyond that sphere.

Grok admits that there may be other Kathleen Duntemanns (there aren’t) as it admits with most other names. It gets points for that. Ok. More errors here: My grandmother Sade was born in 1892, not 1897. My Aunt Kathleen was born on 30 August 1920. She died on 8 July 1999. Grok got the years right, but neither the months nor the dates. My grandfather Harry was never a railroad clerk. He worked his entire adult life for the First National Bank of Chicago, and retired as a vice president of that bank, Chicago’s biggest. The family’s origins were very much middle-class to upper-middle-class. Kathleen lived in Chicago her entire life, and never in Des Plaines.

Now, hold onto your hats. Grok’s answer to my last question is a lulu. This Contra entry is getting long, longer than I prefer to do, but this business is important. Bear with me. Who is Jeff Duntemann? I asked. Heh.

Jeff Duntemann has had a multifaceted career primarily centered around writing, editing, and technology, with a strong focus on computing and science fiction. Born on June 29, 1952, in Chicago, Illinois, he developed an early interest in electronics and writing, which shaped his professional path.

He began his career in technical writing and editing, notably working at Xerox Corporation as an office machine repairman from around 1972 to 1976, where he gained hands-on experience with early office technology. This technical background informed his later work in the computing industry. In the late 1970s and early 1980s, he transitioned into programming and writing about computers. He became a prominent figure in the personal computing revolution, contributing to the development and documentation of software tools. One of his significant early contributions was as a programmer and documenter for the Turbo Pascal compiler at Borland International, starting in 1985. His work helped make Turbo Pascal a widely used tool among developers, and he wrote several influential programming books, including Assembly Language from Square One (1990), Borland Pascal from Square One (1992), and Jeff Duntemann’s Wi-Fi Guide (2004), which catered to both beginners and advanced users.

Duntemann also made a mark in technical publishing. He served as an editor for various magazines, most notably as the editor-in-chief of PC Techniques (later renamed Visual Developer Magazine) from 1989 to 1998, under Coriolis Group Books, a publishing company he co-founded with Keith Weiskamp. Coriolis became known for its extensive line of computer books, and Duntemann’s editorial work extended to other publications like Dr. Dobb’s Journal and Byte Magazine. His writing was characterized by a clear, engaging style that made complex technical topics accessible, earning him a loyal readership.

Parallel to his technical career, Duntemann pursued science fiction writing. He sold his first short story, "Our Lady of the Endless Sky," to Amazing Stories in 1979 and continued to publish fiction intermittently, including works like “Cold Hands” (1982) and the novel The Cunning Blood (2005). His fiction often blended speculative ideas with his technical expertise, though it remained a smaller part of his career compared to his nonfiction output.

After leaving Coriolis in the late 1990s, he continued freelance writing and consulting, focusing on topics like wireless networking and software development. He also maintained a blog, Jeff Duntemann’s Contrapositive Diary, where he wrote about technology, science fiction, and personal interests like astronomy and vintage electronics until health challenges slowed his output. In 2018, he was diagnosed with atrial fibrillation and later faced pulmonary fibrosis, which he documented candidly, reflecting his lifelong habit of sharing knowledge. His last blog entry was on December 15, 2024, and he passed away on December 27, 2024, as noted in an obituary by his wife, Carol.

Duntemann’s career reflects a blend of technical innovation, educational writing, and creative storytelling, leaving a lasting impact on the computing community and a niche legacy in science fiction.

Wow. I didn’t know I was dead. I do not have atrial fibrillation nor pulmonary fibroids. Years and dates are all over the place. I was a Xerox repairman from 1974-1976. I sold “Our Lady of the Endless Sky” to Nova 4 in 1973, not 1979, nor to Amazing Stories. “Cold Hands” was published in 1980, not 1982. Coriolis went under in 2002, not 1998. I just pinched myself; I’m not dead yet. Etc.

My point in all this is that the closer AIs come to describing reality in answers to questions, the more people will trust their answers—including facts that are nonetheless wrong. Those bogus facts can be annoying, or worse. Birth and death dates have legal significance, as do many other things. If a scattered few errors are buried in a lot of otherwise correct text, those errors may be taken as the truth by users of the AI software.

In short, the fewer errors there are in AI answers, the more dangerous those answers become, because people will be more likely to trust AI answers as entirely correct. And given what I know about how LLMs work, I’m pretty sure that AI answers of any complexity will contain errors, not just now but probably forever.

Keep that in mind if you ever ask an AI questions on which anything of value depends. You wouldn’t want people to think you were dead.

Creatine

Feb 27th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
5 comments

Carol and I have done weight training almost continuously since 2004. (We dropped it during the turbulent couple of years we were moving from Colorado Springs down here to Scottsdale.) About a month or so ago, my trainer at the gym recommended a supplement called creatine, which I’d never heard of. He said it helps build muscle. That’s what we pay him for, so if there’s something that supports that goal, I’m willing to try it.

Creatine is yet another chemical that the body manufactures for its own use in keeping muscles and skeletal infrastructure healthy. And like so much else, as people get older they produce less internally. So given that we’re now in our 70s, well, like I said before: I’m willing to try it. Creatine is widely used by bodybuilders. Carol and I are not bodybuilders. We’re mostly trying to keep what muscle we have and maybe put on a little more. Some research suggests creatine improves brain health and may put off or reduce the effects of disorders like Parkinson’s and Alzheimer’s. Good if true, but evidence there is thin.

In truth, what sold me on creatine is its role in providing energy to the body. Creatine increases the body’s supply of adenosine triphosphate (ATP) which is part of a complicated system for delivering chemical energy to cells. Across the last five years or so, my personal energy levels have fallen. I’m an old guy; that happens. But supplementing creatine provides more of the body’s “energy currency,” as explained in the NIH paper linked above. (Yeah, it’s a slog, but read it!) More on this shortly.

As a supplement, creatine monohydrate is a white powder that you can buy in both flavored and unflavored forms. I bought a jar of the unflavored Sunwarrior brand at the Natural Grocer store nearby. It dissolves readily in water or almost any water-based liquid. The jar comes with a scoop to measure out 5 grams. We take 5 grams daily. Carol puts it in her daily protein shake. I currently put it in sugar-free Activia liquid probiotic yogurt. (I recently had an infected tooth and had to take a course of strong antibiotics. The doc said eat probiotic yogurt for awhile to counteract whatever havoc the pills may have committed on my gut biome.)

What I’d really prefer (and will probably switch to soon) is putting my 5 grams of creatine into my daily iced coffee, which I drink about 10 AM. Many people put it in tea, but since I’m prone to kidney stones (which tea can cause) I’m going with coffee.

But…some online articles suggest that caffeine partially inhibits the effects of creatine. That bothered me until I found another Healthline article citing some solid 2017 research putting that rumor to rest. So once I run out of those cute little Activia Dailies, my creatine is going in my coffee.

As with any change in diet or meds, placebo may have something to do with it, but I <i>do</i> feel a little more energetic than in previous years. We’ll see if that continues as time goes on.

There’s one more thing about creatine that you need to be aware of, and it does bother me a little: Creatine promotes water retention in the body. In the month that I’ve been taking creatine, I’ve gained a little over four pounds. Our diet here is low-carb and I’ve hovered close to 150 for some years. Our diet hasn’t changed, so what’s with those four new pounds? Water. It makes me wonder if I’ve been a little bit dehydrated ever since we moved back to single-digit-humidity Arizona in 2015. Possible; hard to know. As with any significant supplement, it would be worth asking your doc about it. I’m just telling you that it seems to work and does not appear to have a downside if you don’t overdo it. Let me know of current or future results if you’re taking it too.

Seven Hundred…What?

Feb 7th, 2025
by Jeff Duntemann.
6 comments

In a box on the floor of my walk-in closet are all the vinyl LPs Carol and I decided to keep. Some few we now have on CD or MP3; most are obscure, with just a few in the middle. Somewhere in there is a Steeleye Span LP I very much enjoyed, Now We Are Six. It’s almost entirely “traditional” material, indicating folk songs going (often) waythehell back. However, Steeleye Span recorded them using modern-day rock instrumentation, and I was surprised back in the ‘80s at how seamlessly the combo worked.

Well, one of those traditional songs popped into my head the other day, as music from my past often does. The song is “Seven Hundred Elves,” and you can catch it on YouTube if you like that sort of thing. It’s fluky enough to expand on a little. This flukiness was apparent to me way back in 1984.

The song is a ballad (lyrics here, on Mudcat) about a farmer who strikes out into the west (of what land we aren’t told) to find a place to build his farm. He brings his hawk and his hound, and evidently some big axes and serious muscle. He starts cutting down trees and eating the deer, and eventually word gets back to the elves. So the elves descend on the farmer’s house to make their preferences known. The farmer, knowing that creatures like elves are non-Christian, sets up crosses all over his little farmhouse, and the elves run screaming in all directions.

Farmer 1, elves 0.

Now, for the flukiness:

       All the elves from out the wood began to dance and spring
       And marched towards the farmer’s house, their lengthy tails to swing.

Huh? Ok, I’m no expert on folklore. But if you’re going to write fantasy, you have to read it. I’ve read quite a bit, and never once have I seen mention of elves with tails. Lengthy tails, at that. And even if said elves were on the small size, seven hundred of them would be piled up twenty deep around the house.

I’m pretty sure they aren’t elves. My guess is that they’re…monkeys.

I’ve read that over in India (I think) hordes of monkeys sometimes descend on villages and become serious nuisances. Lengthy tails swinging? Sure. Foul and grim? Well, what do monkeys throw at each other?

There is some evidence that the song is an adaptation of an old Danish ballad. The Danish version speaks of trolls, not elves. And I think trolls are even less likely to have lengthy tails than elves. Alas, I don’t think Denmark ever had native monkeys in their ecosphere. But suppose, just suppose, that the story ultimately came to the Danes from south Asia, where monkeys are native? That would work.

Which brings me to the point of this morning’s wander, an insight I had back in 1984: Could mythical creatures like elves and dwarves and pixies and so on be ancestral memories of now-extinct hominids? (Yeah, I know, monkeys are not hominids. I’m broadening the concept here.) Homo floresiensis were only 3’6” tall. We don’t know how tall the Denisovians were from a couple of bones and a few teeth. In general, our hominid forerunners were smaller than we are. Even the Neanderthals were short, if wide and probably mondo muscular. I could see them inspiring dwarves, if not elves.

And who knows what hominids and monkeys and other primates we’ve not yet found fossils for? The Homo floresiensis fossils weren’t discovered until 2003, Denisovians until 2010. Maybe there were cold-weather monkeys. The Denisovians lived (among other places) in Siberia.

Quick aside: Tolkien didn’t invent the word “hobbit.” There are some old 19th century booklets called The Denham Tracts listing all kinds of mythical creatures, including hobbits. The whole list is there on Wikipedia, with most having their own Wiki pages. If you’re tired of writing stories about elves and dwarves, well, you’ve got a lot more to choose from.

Again, my point here is that ancient tales handed down for thousands of years could well be inspired by long-extinct primates, most of which we have no evidence for. As for what inspired mythical giants, well, given how short other hominids were, dare I suggest…us?

I so dare. And I will dare until we find some (provably genuine) 8-foot-tall hominid skeletons.

As we used to say in the ‘60s: Crazy world, ain’t it?

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